Spooner Posted August 9, 2017 Share Posted August 9, 2017 (edited) I logged out to post this, so this is what everyone sees generally. Sheepy, I'm not making this to !@#$, I generally want to help you. Let's discuss why this is terrible. You're using at least a dozen different fonts, styles, and sizes. Limit yourself to one font (two at absolute most), and bold/not bold. Two sizes would also be acceptable Remove the Like Us on Facebook and Discord options, and include them as links. They take up too much screen space and most people don't give a shit before they play your game. The start playing/login buttons should be centered, not split vertically. Removing the two sidebars (discord/facebook image) will solve this. Remove the damn ad at the bottom of the screen if it makes up less than 5% of your revenue. Jesus, this isn't 2005. Move the app-store banners here instead. This isn't a design decision, but I would update your description of the game up top with a more accurate picture of what your game actually is. It would be more interesting than a meaningless marketing-blurb. Edited August 9, 2017 by Spooner 6 Quote ☾☆ High Priest of Dio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
丂ħ̧i̧₣ɫ̵γ͘ ̶™ Posted August 10, 2017 Share Posted August 10, 2017 (edited) 8 hours ago, Spooner said: I logged out to post this, so this is what everyone sees generally. Sheepy, I'm not making this to !@#$, I generally want to help you. Let's discuss why this is terrible. You're using at least a dozen different fonts, styles, and sizes. Limit yourself to one font (two at absolute most), and bold/not bold. Two sizes would also be acceptable Remove the Like Us on Facebook and Discord options, and include them as links. They take up too much screen space and most people don't give a shit before they play your game. The start playing/login buttons should be centered, not split vertically. Removing the two sidebars (discord/facebook image) will solve this. Remove the damn ad at the bottom of the screen if it makes up less than 5% of your revenue. Jesus, this isn't 2005. Move the app-store banners here instead. This isn't a design decision, but I would update your description of the game up top with a more accurate picture of what your game actually is. It would be more interesting than a meaningless marketing-blurb. Bottom banner should be "click on the moving emoji and win an iPad" and " find hot singles in your area" That gets my attention more than app-store banners. Damn app store might cost me money or worse. I might end up installing the wrong app, sapping my phone of much needed storage and memory. Edited August 10, 2017 by Shifty Stranger 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForgotPants Posted August 10, 2017 Share Posted August 10, 2017 I'm not very good at this but I tried to simplify the page a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greene Posted August 13, 2017 Share Posted August 13, 2017 I like @ForgotPants suggested layout, but I'd advocate removing the fb and discord areas altogether. if you're hellbent on keeping them, use smaller static buttons instead. You'll let the page load quicker and not have it be atrocious to look at. 1 Quote Formerly known as Grealind of Resvernas (28 October 2014-29 August 2017) and Greene of Japan (29 August 2017-28 Septmber 2017) 7th Caretaker of Duat, the Deity Thoth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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