PnW Comic: Part 2

Entry posted by Roger Campbell · June 12, 2015

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The story continues. Part 1 can be found here.

Politics and War: A Story in Comic form

Part 2

About the Art:

I ended up redoing this one after the second and third panels came out weird. There were a bunch of subtle tweaks that I think made a difference. Most of them focus on setting things out so that they will scan nicely. I've worked out a way to make the brightness and contrast a bit more consistent throughout the page at the expense of looking on the whole lighter.

I reckon radio-speech-bubble thing came out nicely. It looks readable but still similar enough to the background that it doesn't distract from the actual narration/text.

For any eagle-eyes that notice the pixel weirdness in panel four, this was due to me recognizing a glaring typo in the text only seconds before I was actually going to post it. I managed to correct it, but it required a great deal of cutting and camouflaging.

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